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Build me a heart by TheAlleyRat Build me a heart by TheAlleyRat
It's not easy, and if you mess up... you have to start over.
Tetris represents a guy trying to build a relationship. But it get's harder the further up he goes, messing up along the way. Thus, he has to start over to try and build the love.

Just an idea I had while playing the game. I said...heeeey xD

*also, I've had some complaints about the shapes being inaccurate. Yes I see that, but the reason for it is simple. I didnt think this would be noticed (like some other contests I've entered). Nor did I think I even had a chance, so I just did what was best for me. Sorry for the confusion.
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Critique by kiminley Feb 13, 2010, 5:55:07 PM
Vision: i thought you accomplished exactly waht you wanted to, and portrayed it perfectly (5)

Originalty: haven't seen anything like this (5)

Technique: 5, becasue whantever you did, it worked haha (5)

Impact: you expressed yourself and lack of the ability to be in a perfect relationship nicely. although you seem to be not satisified with nayrelationships, i would have makybe liked to have seen a couple rounds of this game being played, round one he screws it up, but round 2 or 3 he completes the heart (it is afterall valinines day :D)
but i can understand whyyou didn't (to keep true to the fact that you think he'll mess up, or that you wanted it to stay short and sweet and simple)
one other thought, i'm not sure about other tetris games, but after i lose on mine, it says game over... that might be to difficult to do on the pixil grid (but then look what you've done here!) and it's just a thought (4.5)

overall, this is amazing and original, and so clever
good luck, this deserves to win
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Lemme start by saying this thing is awesome! ^^ Anywho.

The lines arn't very straight but that makes it a bit easier on the eyes to me. The colors are great and the speed is nice. I like the black line surrounding it. And I also agree with what you said about love vs tetras.

This isn't a bad thing, per say, but it drives me insane when I end up just staring at this thing for HOURS trying to get it to build a heart! XDDD

I need to say 100 words in this thing so BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA
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Dnaliwc Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
nice. original.
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Student General Artist
thank you.
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:iconcfmackey:
cfmackey Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
<3
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Student General Artist
=)
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o--kAne101--o Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
Super awesome piece. +FAV
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Student General Artist
thank you =D
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:iconsilverydoe:
Silverydoe Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
The game... you lost it.
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Student General Artist
and you also
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:iconsilverydoe:
Silverydoe Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
Touché~
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kinikxluna Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
your tetris is all wrong, the blocks are REALLY wrong (mostly all) :( just saying :D but I love it though, especially the message :love: :heart:
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011  Student General Artist
like I've told EVERYONE before, I KNOW and I didnt even THINK it would be noticed at all dude
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:iconkinikxluna:
kinikxluna Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
oh, sry :) but it's really nice though :thumbsup::D
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:iconsujuss501:
sujuss501 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
lol i was so disappointed xD
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Student General Artist
:evillaugh:
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:iconsujuss501:
sujuss501 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
lol ..
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:iconthesquarewave:
Thesquarewave Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
I'mma TETRIS Master! I would have built THAT easy! ;) Nice work.
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Student General Artist
lol nice, i suck at it haha and thanks
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Grahamcrackersamurai Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student General Artist
I saw this and was like "this'll be sweet." and then the end came and was even more happy.
(This should be an icon!)
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Student General Artist
lol thank u very much =) (and ya that would be far out)
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:iconall-these-kiwis:
All-These-Kiwis Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010
Doomed from the start._.
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Student General Artist
yes
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:iconi-nom-you:
i-nom-you Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
aw i absoultly love this!
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student General Artist
thank you =D
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:iconmimidan:
mimidan Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
awesome!!!!! :D
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Student General Artist
thanks =D
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:iconmimidan:
mimidan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Student Digital Artist
your welcome! :D
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:iconkasami-kat:
Kasami-Kat Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
This is a very cute piece. Well done! <3
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Student General Artist
thank you =)
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:iconkasami-kat:
Kasami-Kat Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
Any time! I like your work!
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Student General Artist
=)
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Myoijin Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I curse every time it messed up~
first time I saw it = "Aw~ fucker"
second time = "What a bitch~"
third time = "Damn it!"
fourth time = "Crapperz"
ect.
XDD
And I see it coming every time!
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Student General Artist
lol sucks :iconblowitallupplz:
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:iconthe-hamer:
the-hamer Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010
I'm not one for profanity, but damn.

I'm not kidding, I hate you for this one.
There is a power behind art: the power to move minds and souls, rather than bodies.
you abused it.
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Student General Artist
no idea how to respond to that...is that compliment? ^^;
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:iconthe-hamer:
the-hamer Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010
it's very well done and conveys your message perfectly Just made me depressed is all.
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010  Student General Artist
oh okay, sorry I've just been having too many headaches to think straight lol, thank you
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Steam-Scissors Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2010
no matter how many times i watch. he keeps messing up...

It's a very accurate depiction
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TwiggyTeeluck Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:wave:
You've been featured here: [link]
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:iconnocturnal-romance:
Nocturnal-Romance Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010   General Artist
That is a fucking great idea!! :D Sorry if I'm being too forward, but I that's how great this idea is! :heart:
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Student General Artist
lol it's okay, thanks =D
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Red-Panda-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010   Digital Artist
Yay! Way to go on winning the contest! :iconsuperglompplz:
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010  Student General Artist
thanks ^^
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:iconleaair:
leaair Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010
TETRIS FRIENDS C:
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010  Student General Artist
=D
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Darkangelsv1 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was a triumph.
I'm making a note here:
HUGE SUCCESS
It's hard for you to overstate your satisfaction.

Congrats, Rubi! You've got some balls!


...sent to ya! Don't look at me that way! It wasn't an euphemism for something!
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Student General Artist
:lmao: thanks xDD
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MissMusicMartina Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats on winning :D
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:iconthealleyrat:
TheAlleyRat Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Student General Artist
thanks =D
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:iconmissmusicmartina:
MissMusicMartina Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no prob <3
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BBallGirl2009 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Congrats on winning!^^
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